CAP Text for review
From: Jessel, Tanner – FS
Sent: Tuesday, January 31, 2017 3:18 PM
To: Miner, Cynthia L -FS < >
Subject: RE: CAP Text for review
I made the changes we discussed – plus two more I felt made sense as I edited:
1) I swapped the “We work to explain…” sentence from the “Our Value” section to the “How We Work” section – I felt it fit there better.
2) I also swapped the “We serve…” sentence (which I edited to start with “Our work benefits…” from “How We Work” to “Our Value.” I hope you’ll agree it fits better there.
Attached is the revision (CAP-web-text-v01.docx); the changes cited above are highlighted in yellow.
I also have a printed copy for your desk.
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